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So you think you know me
You think you've got me all figured out
But you don't know what it's like
To have all this insecurity and doubt.

So you want to know what's wrong
When tears are streaming down my face
You say you want to help me
But some scars you can't erase.

You plead for me to explain
As you squeeze my trembling hand
But I don't know what to say
That will make you understand.

These fears that haunt me daily
May seem small and dumb to you
But they control my mind
And there's nothing I can do.

You tell me to get over it
To step outside my cave
But you see, I cannot comprehend
This concept of being brave.
Just a little something I wrote sometime in the past few months...let me know what you think :heart:
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FrameofReality Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very fluid and poetic, I adore this. :heart:
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n1saxmds Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks very much :aww:
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cholie Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011
wow, very fluid, rhythmic, beautiful and powerful!
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n1saxmds Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks very much :thanks:
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cholie Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011
you are most welcome! :D
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XxJazzy-wazzyxX Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Youve just described me in a nutshell :faints:

This is amazing :tighthug:
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n1saxmds Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks very much :iconawwplz:
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XxJazzy-wazzyxX Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your welcome :D
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TheBlackWolfBoy Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011   Writer
Wow it's awesome. So true :hug:
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n1saxmds Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks very much :glomp:
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